Susan's Blog

Wednesday, December 30, 2009

Regret

Spring, soft hard muscle
But dance swirled unseen, unknown
Eyes opened in the fall.

posted at 8:19 am 3 comments

3 comments

I read this out loud just to hear the S sounds.
Neat regret poem

— added by fourwindshaiga on Wednesday, December 30, 2009 at 9:11 am

Just gorgeous! I can feel the swirling (and falling) through your sibilant words.

— added by Nancy Bea Miller on Wednesday, December 30, 2009 at 9:41 am

Powerful three lines. Lovely!

— added by Tumblewords: on Thursday, December 31, 2009 at 10:19 pm